Barry's New Splash Page — A Teaser, Not a Spoiler
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The first version of the Barry page showed a lot of the book. My family's feedback was simple: it gave away too much. So this week the page became a teaser — enough to show who Barry is and how the book feels, without reading the story to you before you buy it.
What happened
- Rebuilt /barry as a whimsical splash page with handwritten, playful type and story scenes
- Swapped full story pages for two text-free teaser crops, and dropped the page and spread images that spoiled the story
- Lightened the copy and set the age range to 2–6 (and anyone who treasures imagination) on the page and the launch post
- Put paperback and Kindle side by side as the two calls to action — both live on the same Amazon page
- Added web-optimized artwork (covers, spreads and outfit crops) so the page loads quickly
